Stubborn.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Miss M (move over school!) on Thursday, 11-Jun-2009 23:13:26

(Author's note: This was from NaPoWriMo, but I've never posted any of my work on the Zone, so I figure a quick bit of writing was better'n nothing. Enjoy.)

Stubborn is not
An adjective.
It's an inheritance
Part of the bloodline
Part of the red pumping
Flowing, unstopping
Through the heart
Lungs
Arms
Legs
Lips
It keeps going -
Because it has no reason not to.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Friday, 12-Jun-2009 11:30:49

This is great, but I feel that you could do something more with this piece. This has a lot of potential. I think it would be cool if you actually personified stubbornness. This is a very nice piece, and it's very true. Good work!

Post 3 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 13-Jun-2009 18:52:40

I love this peace! Although you could have expanded on it a bit, I still think its awesome!